It's hard to describe.
The Samsung Slate! The only tablet for reading Slate.com!
[EDITOR'S NOTE: Hey, this actually is not the only tablet for reading Slate.com. Could you tinker with this to reflect that?]
The Samsung Slate! Not the only tablet for reading Slate.com!
[EDITOR'S NOTE: That comes across as a little negative. Could you talk a little bit less about other tablets and talk a little more about what the Samsung Slate does do?]
The Samsung Slate! The only tablet that can only be used for reading Slate.com!
[EDITOR'S NOTE: Okay, that's not true at all. This can do a lot more than just display Slate.com. Focus on the product features a little more.]
The Samsung Slate! There are features over here to read! ---->
[EDITOR'S NOTE: No, I want you to talk about the features IN THE WRITE-UP. Choose one key feature and discuss what it's good for, please.]
The Samsung Slate! With its 1.6GHz dual-core processor, this bad boy can chop and grind all sorts of fruits and veggies, even rare ones, like genetically modified double-cored apples!
[EDITOR'S NOTE: Just, no! Do you even know what a processor is? This is a tablet! You can use it for surfing the internet! For watching shows! It's basically like a computer but not as cumbersome! Try to do something with that.]
The Samsung Slate! This is a tablet! You can use it for surfing the internet! For watching shows! It's basically like a computer but not as cumbersome!
[EDITOR'S NOTE: You're fired.]
The Samsung Slate! It's great for searching for jobs!
[EDITOR'S NOTE: Oh, so now you understand!]
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